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Blade of fire,
Blade of health,
Hidden in Heaven.

Fear not Justice,
Fear not Divine,
They are one.

Fear Dominica's walls,
Fear Dominica's wrath,
Find The Library.

First the book,
First the riddle,
Then the journey.
A poem intended to be within The Tale of Captain Red: Redux in which the first part of the story is firmly centered around.

It's intention is that of directions, as pirate songs go. Ya know... it's totally iconic and stuff. :\

Dominica is a giant clockwork-type-city within the story that is overrun with "soulless monsters" and "mutations of man and beast."
Mr8att3ry Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I actually love Pirates and would love to read this Tale of Captain Red! I can never write a good song or poem for my stories but wish I could. The word choice here is so...powerful! Bravo!

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DudelRok Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The poem might be a bit misleading to the larger piece of writing, since The Tale of Captain Red boarders on Absurdism pretty harshly. :XD:

Either way, thank you for the comment. It's nice to hear the poem did what it was supposed to do.

And comment returned! :D
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